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FEEDBACK FOR FIRST DRAFT
We received feedback from our first draft. We were praised on what we had managed to achieve and what we had produced so far, such as the clip reverse scenes. We were told to add more of that throughout our piece to make it more interesting visually. One of the shots we included was of the artist and her boyfriend and it shows half of their faces, we were also told to include more of those. Everything was edited to the beat and we tried our best to stay true to the animatic.
As we were lacking footage, one of our improvements to make was to film more footage and fill in the blanks. We were also told that the idea of her being alone was not coming through at the moment therefore we need to shoot more of the artist on her own, in order to establish that she is no longer with her boyfriend. However at this point we hadn't added the black and white effect which was to show she was alone. From this feedback, we plan to film more so we can get all of our locations and fill in the spaces and get it ready for our second deadline.